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Sunday, August 15, 2010


This thing beat my ass just like I thought it would. I would have liked to add color but didn't have much time to work on it this week. I will start with color for the next one. I really need to experiment/study with some different brushes and techniques for environments.

2 comments:

Danny said...

You have the right idea keith, not bad man.

The main issue I see is focal point. Right now it seems like you're divided between the building on the left and the volcano on the right - as if you don't know which one takes precedence. Be a confident storyteller and make the design work for you.

scomac said...

I agree with Danny, pick one or the other, as it is there is no focal point. I think color would help the focus, but it's a good start.

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