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Tuesday, November 1, 2011

edit: worked on leg anatomy, perspective, and design. Not as tight and missing some design things I still wanted to add (wings and back sash), but overall I'm happy with leaving it be. Need to get to the Inferno prompt!

This is where I'm at right now. Working on the legs now. Any critique is welcome.

10 comments:

Keith VanZant said...

Looking good so far man! Rethink the angle of her right shoulder pad.

Chelsea "That Guy" Allen said...

Really liking where you're taking this design!
The legs seem a bit overpowering, but that might just be because they're unfinished.

Danny said...

Awesome, really dig it. Did a po on how I would polish it up. Think the gray bg feels muddy against the sterile armor and the square composition makes it static. Minor stuff, no crits on the drawing, good shit yo.

http://imgur.com/IgY9S

isaak said...

Yeah Keith, I know what you mean. The more I worked on this, the more I started thinking the shoulder looked awkward as hell. Having someone else point it out is what I needed to validate those assumptions. Thanks, brah.

And I agree Chelsea. I don't think it being unfinished is an illusion. The main reason they aren't up to the point of the rest of the body is because I haven't designed I concept I'm happy with yet. They're distracting... they're elongated and red... I don't want people focusing on the legs, so I'm going to mess with it some more. Thanks, yo.

isaak said...

Danny, you're a doll. The PO is going to help me a lot as I move forward with this. Thanks for taking the time to do that! The muddy thing has been something I've struggled with on this. <3

Rah-B said...

I'll have to say, not that I could do anything better, but if you cover up the lower half of the body and just look from the waist up, she seems to be fairly thin, but as you get down to the thighs and calves, they seem way to large in relation to the rest of the body.

Other than that, the design, and costume looks great. Well done on the face, hair and torso, it's obvious you put a lot thought into it.

Bradley J. said...

Don't mean to pile on with the whole leg thing, but the bent leg looks like its turning forward. both legs just seem a bit out of place. the wrist on the left arm seems a bit off as well. that being said, i think all of the design elements work well.I'm being a bit nit-picky, it really does look great.

Chelsea "That Guy" Allen said...

Painted over Danny's PO a bit to slim the legs down and give the shoes a little more shape. Hope this helps!
http://imgur.com/4dnxv

christina said...

I really like your second costume here! Her weapon design is super pretty with the flower(pink?) resting inside the moon :] The pink in the color scheme helps make it look a lot more SM! She looks a lot more elegant and feminine now that you've taken away some of the shoulders.

My favorite thing about this is where you were going with the armor design on her torso, the fabric falling off her shoulders and heading towards the center of her chest reminds me of a typical sailor collar. I feel like all you would need is a pendent of some sort in the middle for it to scream sailor moon!

isaak said...

Glad you like it Christina, being the biggest SM fan of us all.

Thanks to everyone for their input as well!

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